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For vision I give it a three and a half out of five. The over all mood of the peice is'nt as strong as other photos I've seen, but I do thing it conveys it's message well enough. The hint of snow is nice, but I think it would show couldness better with a tiny bit more, or with less straw and grass in the way. I also think that giving more contrast between the light of the crown and the dark background would create a more dramatic effect.
For originality: 4.5, because I've actually seen quite a few digital paintings of poeple with nearly the same crown and cloak, but the fact that this is a photo, and that the overall feel is quite different (all the others were darker and mysterious) it makes this peice far more unique.
For technique: 2.5, because I think that the lighting could have been done much better. The fact that the sun is still up doesn't make me think of coldness like her clothing and pose suggest. I think that night creates a better image of cold in my mind, but I do love her pose and clothing. the setting is also the perfect location, just not quite the right time
for impact: 3.5. I do think more contrast and darker lighting would be more dramatic, and maybe softening the edges of her clothes with a digital editing program would help too, because although the pose and crown are striking, they seem to merge a bit with the background because of lack of contrast.
Overall I'd say that you nailed the pose and clothing, but you should work on your lighting a bit.
I apoligize if that wasn't what you were looking for, but I'venever writen a critique before and I'm not quite sure how, but I hope I helped you at least a little bit.
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